Turned out a bit.. off. I think it just plain clashes in parts. And drags out.
But I can't really go back and fix anything. I had to do this in one sitting because I was using some certain things that wouldn't let me save.. *ahem*
Haha, thank you! Certainly not what I had in mind, but that's definately a good sign. <3
-- I've seen things you people wouldn't believe. Attack ships on fire off the shoulder of Orion. I watched C-beams glitter in the dark near the Tannhauser gate. All those moments will be lost in time, like.. tears in rain.
I dunno, I like it! Especially for a single run; I would've had to come back to it several times. It almost sounds, if my ears don't deceive me, like a cross between Castlevania: Symphony of the Night's Lost Paintings ( [link] ) and a military march of some old, stubborn nation.
-- If I've never critiqued your work before, take it in stride. After all, I'm just trying to help, and you can always ignore/note me.
-- I've seen things you people wouldn't believe. Attack ships on fire off the shoulder of Orion. I watched C-beams glitter in the dark near the Tannhauser gate. All those moments will be lost in time, like.. tears in rain.
Devious Comments
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You like Ice Cream
You like Ice Cream
You will buy Ice Cream
Life is meaningless, without Ice Cream.
-Ice Cream Truck
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I've seen things you people wouldn't believe.
Attack ships on fire off the shoulder of Orion.
I watched C-beams glitter in the dark near the Tannhauser gate.
All those moments will be lost in time, like.. tears in rain.
Time to die.
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Icon by ~PandaBandit!
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If I've never critiqued your work before, take it in stride. After all, I'm just trying to help, and you can always ignore/note me.
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If I've never critiqued your work before, take it in stride. After all, I'm just trying to help, and you can always ignore/note me.
THIS IS AWESOME<3
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My Boss: BweDeDeDepDepDep. Yeah okay, ya flake.
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You like Ice Cream
You like Ice Cream
You will buy Ice Cream
Life is meaningless, without Ice Cream.
-Ice Cream Truck
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I've seen things you people wouldn't believe.
Attack ships on fire off the shoulder of Orion.
I watched C-beams glitter in the dark near the Tannhauser gate.
All those moments will be lost in time, like.. tears in rain.
Time to die.
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